A moofable feast. ([info]alexandraerin) wrote in [info]ae_stories,

Tales of MU 465: Dream On

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[info]zathras_ix

November 1 2010, 15:06:01 UTC 1 year ago

Cunning linguistics:
"Ingimar" is Old Norse for
Yngvi's Warrior

[info]lunaroki

November 1 2010, 17:01:23 UTC 1 year ago

Typo Report

Iin his skin, I meant.

Too many I's.


“Maybe he went up to go to the bathroom?” I suggested.

Usually people say "got up" rather than "went up" when talking about someone arising from sleep.


“You know this… thing?” I asked her. It sounded rude, but “person” seemed a bit off andI wasn’t sure “guy” was applicable.

Needs a space between "and" and "I".
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