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lunaroki
November 8 2010, 19:55:45 UTC 1 year ago
My blanket curtains had ended up piled in a puddle on the floor ,and would probably need to go through the dryer.
“It was… intense,” he said.”The sex, I mean.”
“But the sex as more so, right?” he asked.
She’d made sure no idea get within a three yard radius of her brain unless she trusted the source.
What was the point of making him constantly proving himself?
“I just don’t think we were entirely in our own head’s.
zathras_ix
November 9 2010, 03:16:09 UTC 1 year ago
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ae_stories,
November 8 2010, 19:55:45 UTC 1 year ago
Typo Report
Comma is on the wrong side of the space between "floor" and "and".
Needs a space between "he said." and "”The sex,".
Missed a "w" on "was".
That "get" should probably be "got".
"proving" should be "prove".
No apostrophe needed in "heads".
November 9 2010, 03:16:09 UTC 1 year ago
Be anything but subtle
When things get fishy