A moofable feast. ([info]alexandraerin) wrote in [info]ae_stories,

Void Dogs Chapter 59: Eye Spy

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[info]alexandraerin

January 31 2009, 10:35:21 UTC 3 years ago

Typos.

Report typos here. :)

[info]stormy_llewelyn

January 31 2009, 15:29:35 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typos.

"She squeezed her left eye shut as her fingers came near it with the blowing patch."

glowing maybe? :)

[info]lunaroki

January 31 2009, 17:10:05 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typos.

“What we need to figure out a way to break the illusion,” Lilliana said.

Think you're missing an "is" in that sentence.


Lilliana took the patch and studied intently for a few moments,

Missing an "it" in there.

[info]zathras_ix

February 17 2009, 05:46:01 UTC 3 years ago

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