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More Tales of MU Chapter 83: Great Advice

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[info]fayroberts

February 3 2009, 10:55:49 UTC 3 years ago

Typo?

“If it were an older an elf, I would be offering him consolation on the eventual loss of you, but you cannot count on keeping the attention of an elf of that age for long.”

Extraneous "an"?

[info]popelizbet

February 3 2009, 15:29:04 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typo?

That was the one I was coming to note, good call.

[info]popelizbet

February 3 2009, 15:29:35 UTC 3 years ago Edited:  February 3 2009, 15:30:30 UTC

Re: Typo?

conjurors = conjurers?

"it’s provenance" - no apostrophe

[info]lunaroki

February 3 2009, 17:54:49 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typo?

No haul of silver in socks in in this one.

Duplicate "in" in this one.

[info]jupiterrhode

February 3 2009, 18:57:34 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typo?

Not a typo, as such, but: "There were also pictures of mom’s latest work"

That "mom's" should be capitalized when used by itself like that (as a name), I believe.

[info]andy9306

February 3 2009, 11:14:16 UTC 3 years ago

Well. I think this makes it abundantly clear that, by elven law, Jamie is no longer a free being.

Good thing it's a human university.

[info]senshikittie

February 3 2009, 11:42:10 UTC 3 years ago

Jamie really needs to ditch Iason. I'm finding more and more reasons to dislike him all the time. >.>

[info]bluefate

February 3 2009, 14:53:55 UTC 3 years ago

Agreed. How Jamie's Great-Grandfather shut off about it is kind of scary. Kind of like, Oh, he owns you now and I really shouldn't mettle.
Jamie needs to get out now.

[info]maculategiraffe

February 3 2009, 11:49:50 UTC 3 years ago

Ho. Lee. Crap. Dude.

Jamie's always been a little slow on the uptake, but I'm starting to think he's actually dumb as a stump. First going off in the woods with Allie, and now this. "I should not speak to you further without his permission"? How do you not realize the implications of that? How is he not flipping the fuck out right now? Man, it's a good thing he's (apparently) pretty.

Just that one line does help me understand Iason a little better. I REALLY wonder what the grandfather would have said if Jamie had shown him the other bracelet-- the one that deactivates the stag bracelet. I think it's pretty clear now that the concessions Iason has been making to Jamie's delicate human sensibilities are absolutely unprecedented in elf-human relations. I kind of get the sense that the grandfather would pass out in shock at the idea of a rider granting his mount the ability to refuse him at any time.

Jamie is pretty entrenched in human culture, despite those visits to his elven kin (his grandfather's elven-ness seems to continue to come as a shock to him; the obsession with mortality is obviously a common elven thing, since Iason also made a remark early on about how his own mortality drove him, but Jamie obviously finds it weird and off-putting), and... well. It's kind of like Feejee and Mackenzie in the current MU storyline; from a mermaid's point of view, Mackenzie is prey and is being totally unreasonable to dislike the thought of being eaten, and from an elf's point of view, Jamie is a mount and is being totally unreasonable to dislike the thought of being housed in the stable and ridden at will. Feejee and Iason both feel they are making enormous concessions and having to be quite unnecessarily circumspect and restrained, while from the humans' point of view (Mackenzie and Jamie both having been "raised human," even if they both have other components), they come off as potentially dangerous sociopaths. I'm fascinated to see how both story arcs play out.

[info]leslie_r

February 3 2009, 13:02:29 UTC 3 years ago

I wonder if granpa's perspective on Jaime's.. 'betrothal'? ...would change at all if he realized the full implications of how Iason 'sprung' the braclet on his grandson. Contemporary stag bracelets appear to be designed with more consensual human/elf relations in mind than the 'old-school' bracelets like the one Iason gave Jaime.

Jamie's grandfather may be under certain mistaken assumptions about how Jamie entered into this 'relationship', we know he's older than any of Jamie's human relatives (living and non) but is he old enough to 'fondly remember' the days when use of the stag bracelets was all about picking a pretty human and ride-ride-ride-rape-ride-ride-ride-rape?

[info]stormcaller3801

February 3 2009, 13:34:13 UTC 3 years ago

I think it's far more a matter that he entered the conversation with certain preconceptions about Jamie's relationship (including the idea that Jamie was pursuing Iason) and never quite dropped them. Assumptions started the conversation, and they never quite dropped out. Possibly including on our part.

[info]leslie_r

February 4 2009, 00:22:57 UTC 3 years ago

Indeed, granpa sounds much less creepy if we look at the conversation from the PoV that Granpa is assuming Jamie was persuing Iason. The whole 'There is no higher purpose a human can achive,' thing sounds less like, "Ah-ha, I'll let my blatant elf-centric bigotry slip out now since you've become a stag-bitch my grandson." and more like, "Well, I support your decision to become a stag-bitch and wish you and your manly-man well."

[info]gothmog_dave

February 3 2009, 15:15:55 UTC 3 years ago

It is quite an illuminating example of how different the two cultures really are, and I daresay this will be made even clearer in time.

[info]stormcaller3801

February 3 2009, 16:11:40 UTC 3 years ago

True. Which makes me wonder about the dwarves- we're already aware of their severe paranoia and the rather unique (and literal) gender wars they have, but for the most part they seem to be more akin to humans than elves are. But that may be solely due to a lack of evidence, and the tendency for them to keep things secret. As opposed to the elves, whom I've yet to see miss an opportunity to remind everyone else of how superior they are.

Makes all those arguments about how elves should have a bonus to Charisma (on account of their attractiveness) fall flat.

[info]brenda_ea

February 3 2009, 17:03:08 UTC 3 years ago

I'm trying to remember what you mean about the dwarves' gender wars, but I cannot place it. When did we learn about that, and what did we learn?

[info]stormcaller3801

February 3 2009, 17:10:58 UTC 3 years ago

Assuming I'm not nucking futz (and there's definitely an assumption there), we learned somewhere along the way (bonus story, follow-up to the jewelry store robberies?) that the dwarven gender wars are exactly that- wars. The men and the women live separately because they tend to get into full-fledged brawls. I think the whole marriage and having kids thing does occur, but even that tends to be very much a case of saying 'I do' between kidney punches, and after they do the deed, they stay apart. But the whole marriage and kids part I'm fuzzier on, which my already suspect recollection should probably be in a police lineup for that one.

[info]katthevamp

February 3 2009, 18:54:49 UTC 3 years ago

OS request

Can we have granpa's views on this?

[info]misslynx

February 3 2009, 22:16:04 UTC 3 years ago

Very interesting, as well as disturbing... I'll be looking forward to seeing how part two of the conversation goes, assuming Iason gives permission for it.

The question about him no longer being a student was particularly chilling, given the mentions in ToMU about who isn't qualified to be a student... namely slaves.

[info]zergonapal

February 4 2009, 02:59:35 UTC 3 years ago

It seems a bit tricky to me. On one hand it seems that being "bracleted" means you are essentially a slave in elven culture.
But while slavery is still accepted in human culture I'm pretty sure that slavers just cannot go out and just nab anyone they want and theres probably a complicated legal process that one has to follow in order to sign away their life.
It just boogles the mind. For example what would happen if an old-school stag-rider was wo go out and abduct a human in these times? Would the empire do anything to get him back or would it be quietly swept under the rug for the sake of human/elf relations? What if the family of the abductee then decided to take matters into their own hands and hire mercenaries to get their son back?
Back to Jamie, so is he a slave in elven eyes? If so is he also a slave according to human law? I don't think so, since he has been tricked into accepting the bracelet I think such a legal status could be challenged in a human court. Could Jamie just take matters into his own hands and "sever" his relationship with Iason?

[info]brenda_ea

February 5 2009, 19:57:55 UTC 3 years ago

The mere fact that Jamie also has a bracelet that will supposedly remove the one which "enslaves" him would probably keep it from going to court.

Although I would think Jamie would want to TEST the second bracelet...

[info]readaholicagain

February 4 2009, 10:29:49 UTC 3 years ago

horns of a dilemma

Oh. My. Kosh. That bracelet is getting creepier and creepier. Now he's throwing off the change back of your own free will bracelet.
This whole thing is getting closer and closer to repeated rape by magic. Jamie isn't consenting of his own free will - the bracelet is making him do it.
Is there going to be a dramatic rescue from the stables at Treeholme in the future? And Iason is really, really nasty. Trickery, deceit, attempting to get Jamie to give up everything - and the "love they shared" - one great big fat lie, the whole thing. Stag form or human form, the bracelet is master. In fact, the more subtle effects of the bracelet in human form are nastier.
A real story flip at this point would be Iason suddenly repenting of what he's doing to Jamie and freeing him. Not that I see that happening...

[info]zathras_ix

February 17 2009, 05:40:20 UTC 3 years ago

Jamie is committed
To Iason far more than he
Yet realizes

Iason owns Jamie—
As far as Elves are concerned
They're already wed

It would now appear
That Jamie has indeed been
Taken for a ride
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