A moofable feast. ([info]alexandraerin) wrote in [info]ae_stories,

More Tales of MU Chapter 84: Grappling With Issues

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[info]alexandraerin

February 4 2009, 10:33:39 UTC 3 years ago

Typo thread.

Please reply to this with any typos.

[info]concreteguitar

February 4 2009, 12:08:24 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typo thread.

it didn’t take much to get my worked up.

[info]popelizbet

February 4 2009, 14:20:19 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typo thread.

an hors d’oeuvres - should it be "an hors d'ouevre", since it's singular?

[info]eleonora_egrene

February 4 2009, 19:54:20 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typo thread.

It felt good being ridden by a guy like Iason. In both sense of the word.

s missing senses

[info]lunaroki

February 4 2009, 20:48:24 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typo thread.

It was a difference degree more than behavior.


Missing an "of" in there.

[info]katthevamp

February 4 2009, 18:53:57 UTC 3 years ago

He needs to search about the bracelet...

Seriously, Iason isn't telling him, and it seems to be messing with him when he's NOT a stag.

[info]greenwood_goat

February 4 2009, 21:22:21 UTC 3 years ago

Re: He needs to search about the bracelet...

Agreed, and Iason probably hasn't told him everything. Come to that, there may be things about it that Iason isn't aware of. His grandfather gave it to him at his leaving ceremony, and didn't seem to be long on details. We don't know how old the bracelet is, or whether it had other owners prior to that. The original owner might even have died while out hunting, and the elf who won the bracelet might have been unsure of its provenance.

'What's there to argue about? It's a stag bracelet, its previous owner was not from around here, and furthermore, is not around here, and my arrow in the stag's heart makes me its current owner. As to the other questions, my cousin can determine the answers to those when I give the bracelet to him. His envy and whining grew tiresome eight decades ago.'

The bracelet might not be messing with Jamie when he's human. Some people enjoy role-play as a mount or pet, and Jamie also has all the positive reinforcement that the bracelet gives him when Iason transforms and rides him. One can develop a mental addiction or fixation on any gratifying stimulus, and Jamie seems to be as susceptible as anyone - those three cure addictions didn't stop him from smoking.

We shall have to observe the behaviour of the subject closely, and see what stimuli our experimental iacolope encounters next. >8=)>

- Goat in a white coat.

[info]katthevamp

February 9 2009, 18:53:01 UTC 3 years ago

Re: He needs to search about the bracelet...

It probably wa, though, notice how he had to take off hte indering bracelet to get off.

[info]yamikuronue

February 4 2009, 19:36:01 UTC 3 years ago

Just read the last two chaps - so now both stories are explicitly about BDSM-style relationships. AE, do you just hate tops or something? I've yet to see a good, healthy example of a top O.o

[info]cluudle

February 4 2009, 21:03:36 UTC 3 years ago

I've gotta ask - have you seen a good, healthy example of anyone? Good and healthy isn't exactly the character style that's common 'round these parts.

That aside, the dwarf shopkeeper lady who appears in one of the bonus stories seems both toppy and well-adjusted about it.

[info]yamikuronue

February 4 2009, 21:09:58 UTC 3 years ago

Good point. I dunno, Jamie seems to have a reasonably healthy perspective on the whole thing, soft spot for Iason aside -- it's just, the more I read, the more Amy and Iason both piss me off, and I'm not even going to get into Viktor.

[info]cluudle

February 4 2009, 21:30:51 UTC 3 years ago

Could you satisfy my curiosity and give me the overview on Viktor? I actually like him. (Partially because he doesn't like Mack, donchaknow.)

[info]leslie_r

February 4 2009, 23:35:56 UTC 3 years ago

Something I just noticed and which may lead to more screwed-up-ness in Jamie's sexuality in the future. So far we've seen Jaime in sexual situations where he was either giving to someone else (usually Iason), or someone else was taking (again, also Iason). In his fantasies in this story he rebels against the subbish role he feels he's been forced into by taking, and taking, and taking.. but it doesn't satisfy.

It would be all too easy, we see hints of it here, for Jaime to assume this is just how things are for himself and just go whole hog trying to hammer his square peg into the stag's round hole rather than waiting and seeing what it would be like if someone else were to Give to Him for a change.

[info]zergonapal

February 5 2009, 06:21:05 UTC 3 years ago

Or it could be the bracelet.
I don't think there will be a whole lot about it in the MUniverse version of wikipedia. The braclet strikes me as something that elves would want to kep to themselves given the whole sordid rape and ride history associated with it.
On the otherhand this is a university and Jamie could probably find an enchantment major who would just love to write a paper on a little known artifact...like Mack :)

[info]zathras_ix

February 17 2009, 05:39:27 UTC 3 years ago

Free-minded Jamie
Won't own up to being owned
While he's on his own

Many of Jamie's
Personal observations
Are penetrating

The second bracelet
"Suppresses the magic" of
Of the first—Hmmm
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