A moofable feast. ([info]alexandraerin) wrote in [info]ae_stories,

Star Harbor Nights Chapter 27: Straight Shooter

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[info]alexandraerin

February 5 2009, 10:35:17 UTC 3 years ago

Typo Negative

[info]andy9306

February 5 2009, 12:01:14 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typo Negative

"distinction at that difference"

Should maybe be.

"distinction at that distance"

[info]andy9306

February 5 2009, 12:23:11 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typo Negative

Also, missing an end quotation mark in "“It’s just like you said."

First time she speaks, I believe.

[info]lunaroki

February 5 2009, 16:19:27 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Typo Negative

She turned to find herself facing an athletic woman in with dirty blonde hair,


Extraneous "in" before "with".

[info]quixque

February 5 2009, 15:41:43 UTC 3 years ago

Seeing as how Dwight is talking to her, Parakeet may be hurt much more than she thinks and Bulletina's power isn't so crappy.

[info]lunaroki

February 5 2009, 16:23:15 UTC 3 years ago

Here's hoping Dwight's just taking advantage of a loophole in the rules restricting his actions to have Parakeet pass along a message for him to someone in the living world, otherwise she's in big trouble.

[info]quixque

February 5 2009, 21:42:21 UTC 3 years ago

I would hope so, but the only other Death that we've seen, Val, didn't seem to have any restrictions in talking with the guys at the bar she lives above.

[info]katthevamp

February 24 2009, 05:26:09 UTC 3 years ago

Did I miss something? I read through the archives, and don't remeber anything about that.

*Skipped the fillers*

[info]isik

February 6 2009, 04:57:29 UTC 3 years ago

Heh.

The first rule of episode 27.... there is no episode 27.

The second rule.... go to 28, I told ya! -giggle-

-r
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