A moofable feast. ([info]alexandraerin) wrote in [info]ae_stories,

Void Dogs 81: Mass Defect

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[info]lunaroki

May 27 2009, 15:08:04 UTC 3 years ago

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“So,” he said, as the people sitting around the table began to shift their attention from shootee to shooter .

Extraneous space in front of the closing period.


“I should point out that I singled out your departed colleague to make my initial point because he was disrespectful, not because he was entirely wrong about the general shape of things.

Closing quote missing.


He whirled around as the doors slid open behind him. There was a bang, and he fell to the ground as another middle manager came into the room.

“Consider this an object lesson,” the newcomer said. “My employer has eyes and hands everywhere. You probably thought you were clever, buying mass-produced managers in bulk from the same source…”

No typo here. I just couldn't help shaking my head and laughing at this part. This is just such a typical screw-up! XD

[info]hnmic

May 27 2009, 16:11:34 UTC 3 years ago

hehehe.

How many middle managers with Hand KEGs can we pile on the floor?

[info]zathras_ix

May 27 2009, 18:18:23 UTC 3 years ago

"Normalcy" is to
Everyone's benefit
Except the losers
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