I didn't even realize this was the 350th chapter until I went to type the number into the title field. 350 updates, not counting the bonuses/Other Tales... wow. -whistles-*
I miss the forum quite a lot. I feel so much more restricted here than I did there. I feel like I can't bring up a new subject that isn't directly related to the chapter. It's also harder to know when there's been updates on older threads since they don't come to the top. I also miss Zathras and cer haikus. :(
Haven't done one of these in a while...in the absence of Zathras, I'll just have to do. :P
At the carriage stop Amy held back Wanted one just for her and her Mack Is it pushing? Who knows But submissiveness shows And now Amy's been warned of attack.
Mack admits her voice-raising mistake While she talked with the girl from the lake She's owned up to her error Though mermaids cause terror And want to turn Mack into steak.
And this new event makes me holler! And may make Mack feel a bit taller To show just what they are Amy's going quite far And she's buying Mackenzie a collar!
You know...I find it rather ironic that The Boyfriend (TM) and I were discussing getting a collar for me yesterday and that is what Amaranth wishes to get for Mackenzie.
Ooh, this is not going to end well. They've been together for what, a few weeks, a couple months? Already, she's getting a collar, probably because she's feeling insecure and wants to, as she put it, "firm things up," in other words reassure them both. Lame.
I'm an actual person in a collared relationship (m'the one wearing it) and reading this made me zomgangry. I have never been an Amaranth fan, but right now I would like to set her field on fire and do a dance of glee.
Srsly. It's not something you just SPRING on your s/o, oh hai, gonna put you on the spot in the shop right nao, kk? 'Cause I'm insecure and have to be right about everything ever. -facepalm-
Love the story, wouldn't change the way AE writes it for anything.
But Throat Fucking Saviors on Burnt Toast I Hate. Hate. Hate. Fluffy BDSM shit like this. "Oh hai, i love you, i love you too, it's our 3 monthversary, wanna put on this symbol of serious subservience and servitude?" Why do I have a feeling like were they real people Amaranth and Mack would be CollarMe trolls?
-flail!-
tl:dr - I concur with the lameocity of Amaranth and Mack's "i am a twue sub" thought patterns.
Interesting to see someone on the inside of this societal group's view. I felt the same way, that the collar thing seems to me like a serious step, but not being into it, I wasn't sure if I was on track or not. Not having a reference point sucks sometimes.
I think this just illustrates why Mother Khaele has reservations about Mack and Amaranth's relationship. Neither of them have the maturity level for the 'Serious Business' of a D/s relationship of the type they're pretending to have and as it stands now it looks like Amaranth is getting wicked-crazy possessive of Mack as a salve to her own insecurities while at the same time unconciously feeding off Mack's naivite and need for a... well...
To paraphrase other web-fiction I greatly enjoyed that dealt with BDSM (among other) themes, Mack doesn't need an Owner... she needs a Mommy.
That pretty much was my feeling on the matter. I'm in a D/s relationship as well, and ironically enough, my fella and I have been together for about five months and still have no collar. Because we take that shit seriously, and don't try to just throw symbols around to make ourselves feel good and, as you put it, show what true little "dominates" and subs we bes. Oh well. With any luck, the great Mother shall say, "Okay, see, this is why you can't have nice things," and take Mack away.
That's another thing, the collar is 'Serious Business' despite how casual Amaranth is treating it. How is Ian going to react to this? If he's lucky this'll be one more 'weird thing' he's just clueless about and will see it as no different from anything else Mack does on Amaranth's insistence. Strnage, but not especially significant. If he's not he'll recognize what's more or less a D/s 'Wedding Ring' and start feeling even less like 'Mackenzie's Boyfriend' and more like 'that lesbian demon-girl's occasional penis' than he already does.
Hi Lexy, enjoying the discussion, but I know you like the Muppets and wanted to let you know of a great news story about how the Muppets (20 of them!) came into existence:
*Author cannot actually whistle - I learned to whistle when I was 17 ... and my father learned to do so alongside with me; and he was 47 at the time. So take it easy. :P
On-topic: Poor Amaranth. She is silently screaming a need of reassurance herself.
I agree with previous posters that getting a collar now is rushing the relationship forward a bit, but at least it is not a magically enchanted collar that can not be removed and transforms the wearer into a submissive rideable quadruped. Hypothetically speaking of course. Not that anyone would do something like that.
I'm a bit disturbed by this idea of the collar. It upsets me, not because of the BDSM element, but because they are not in a healthy or stable relationship. Amaranth is too insecure and it is just to unstable. I'm excited to see where this is going
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Also, never saw this discussion link until today, though I've been following the stories for months. Way to go, me...
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February 11 2009, 04:10:19 UTC 3 years ago
Limerick summary
Haven't done one of these in a while...in the absence of Zathras, I'll just have to do. :PAt the carriage stop Amy held back
Wanted one just for her and her Mack
Is it pushing? Who knows
But submissiveness shows
And now Amy's been warned of attack.
Mack admits her voice-raising mistake
While she talked with the girl from the lake
She's owned up to her error
Though mermaids cause terror
And want to turn Mack into steak.
And this new event makes me holler!
And may make Mack feel a bit taller
To show just what they are
Amy's going quite far
And she's buying Mackenzie a collar!
February 11 2009, 04:30:44 UTC 3 years ago
Re: Limerick summary
Oh my god, this is adorable. Clearly, I've been missing a lot by not pursuing the peripheral discussions.February 11 2009, 04:33:57 UTC 3 years ago
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I used to do them for every chapter for a while, but then I lost my internets and missed a bunch. :(February 11 2009, 10:52:59 UTC 3 years ago
Re: Limerick summary
Zathras is sorely missed. But you, Sire, are showing good signs ... ;-)February 11 2009, 04:28:26 UTC 3 years ago
February 11 2009, 05:14:31 UTC 3 years ago
February 11 2009, 05:25:25 UTC 3 years ago
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This.I'm an actual person in a collared relationship (m'the one wearing it) and reading this made me zomgangry. I have never been an Amaranth fan, but right now I would like to set her field on fire and do a dance of glee.
Srsly. It's not something you just SPRING on your s/o, oh hai, gonna put you on the spot in the shop right nao, kk? 'Cause I'm insecure and have to be right about everything ever. -facepalm-
Love the story, wouldn't change the way AE writes it for anything.
But Throat Fucking Saviors on Burnt Toast I Hate. Hate. Hate. Fluffy BDSM shit like this. "Oh hai, i love you, i love you too, it's our 3 monthversary, wanna put on this symbol of serious subservience and servitude?" Why do I have a feeling like were they real people Amaranth and Mack would be CollarMe trolls?
-flail!-
tl:dr - I concur with the lameocity of Amaranth and Mack's "i am a twue sub" thought patterns.
February 11 2009, 06:03:25 UTC 3 years ago
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I would like to state that your usage of flail makes you awesome and full of win.February 11 2009, 14:40:52 UTC 3 years ago
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Interesting to see someone on the inside of this societal group's view. I felt the same way, that the collar thing seems to me like a serious step, but not being into it, I wasn't sure if I was on track or not. Not having a reference point sucks sometimes.February 12 2009, 03:12:38 UTC 3 years ago
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I think this just illustrates why Mother Khaele has reservations about Mack and Amaranth's relationship. Neither of them have the maturity level for the 'Serious Business' of a D/s relationship of the type they're pretending to have and as it stands now it looks like Amaranth is getting wicked-crazy possessive of Mack as a salve to her own insecurities while at the same time unconciously feeding off Mack's naivite and need for a... well...To paraphrase other web-fiction I greatly enjoyed that dealt with BDSM (among other) themes, Mack doesn't need an Owner... she needs a Mommy.
February 12 2009, 05:40:43 UTC 3 years ago
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That pretty much was my feeling on the matter. I'm in a D/s relationship as well, and ironically enough, my fella and I have been together for about five months and still have no collar. Because we take that shit seriously, and don't try to just throw symbols around to make ourselves feel good and, as you put it, show what true little "dominates" and subs we bes. Oh well. With any luck, the great Mother shall say, "Okay, see, this is why you can't have nice things," and take Mack away.February 12 2009, 08:43:54 UTC 3 years ago
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That's another thing, the collar is 'Serious Business' despite how casual Amaranth is treating it. How is Ian going to react to this? If he's lucky this'll be one more 'weird thing' he's just clueless about and will see it as no different from anything else Mack does on Amaranth's insistence. Strnage, but not especially significant. If he's not he'll recognize what's more or less a D/s 'Wedding Ring' and start feeling even less like 'Mackenzie's Boyfriend' and more like 'that lesbian demon-girl's occasional penis' than he already does.3 years ago
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February 11 2009, 05:16:43 UTC 3 years ago
OT - Muppets x 20!
Hi Lexy, enjoying the discussion, but I know you like the Muppets and wanted to let you know of a great news story about how the Muppets (20 of them!) came into existence:http://www.cnn.com/2009/LIVING/wayoflif
Hope this link works for you. Good story.
wessodog
February 11 2009, 10:51:02 UTC 3 years ago
On-topic: Poor Amaranth. She is silently screaming a need of reassurance herself.
February 11 2009, 21:55:51 UTC 3 years ago
collar
I agree with previous posters that getting a collar now is rushing the relationship forward a bit, but at least it is not a magically enchanted collar that can not be removed and transforms the wearer into a submissive rideable quadruped. Hypothetically speaking of course. Not that anyone would do something like that.Mackenzie could always surprise us and say "no."
February 11 2009, 22:05:20 UTC 3 years ago
deer horses, oh my!
If Amaranth has sex with Jamie while he is transformed, does that violate any of Mother Khaele's rules?February 12 2009, 00:09:09 UTC 3 years ago
Good story
February 17 2009, 05:25:43 UTC 3 years ago
She'll have a talk with Feejee—
Will they chew the fat?
Amaranth collars
Caron as to how best to
Collar Mackenzie
Perhaps Mackenzie
Will get new insight into
Goblinoid culture