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lunaroki
February 11 2009, 19:49:44 UTC 3 years ago
“It’s okay,” a woman’s voice said, from out of sight”above” Diana’s head, as she lay.
The main straightened up and looked over Diana’s body at the newcomer.
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February 11 2009, 19:49:44 UTC 3 years ago
Typo Report
Missing the space between "sight" and ""above"". Also not so sure you need the commas after "said" and "head". Makes it read oddly.
The "main" should be "man".