- Lucinda Blake is the reporter who tried to interview Dee.
- Cetea is the woman in the room below Mackenzie's.
- Originally, I was going to write a story with several of the reptilian characters sitting together and talking, but when it ended up mostly being Cetea talking about her culture, I decided to give her a spotlight.
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Other Tales of MU: Balancing Scales
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February 12 2009, 02:27:20 UTC 3 years ago
I think you mean race.
"One human I met last year made a big deal about how she’s skinblind, as she put it. ‘I don’t see humans or gorgons or elves, I just see people.’ That’s a wonderful disorder for a human to have, but I can’t not be aware that I’m a gorgon surrounded by humans, and I’d rather have other people think about what that means than pretend it doesn’t matter."
That is great.
February 12 2009, 04:25:44 UTC 3 years ago
typooo
"...that’s why they’re do dull compared to me.”so dull
February 12 2009, 14:34:30 UTC 3 years ago
Re: typooo
I can't see an official typo thread...Should there be a comma after "know"?
February 12 2009, 04:32:44 UTC 3 years ago
Wow
That was just incredible. There was so much information, but it flowed so naturally. It's really great when we get to have these little insights into the lesser-known parts of the MUniverse.February 12 2009, 04:46:02 UTC 3 years ago
February 12 2009, 05:13:47 UTC 3 years ago
I really like Lucinda, and how she's trying so hard but still keeps catching herself... I hope she manages to get some intelligence back at the newspaper.
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February 12 2009, 08:09:53 UTC 3 years ago
That's one thing I love about MU the other races have real unique cultures not just human culture rebranded.
February 12 2009, 08:41:43 UTC 3 years ago
I really like the unique perspective of the gorgon, and how smoothly the interview flowed - even with Lucinda having to catch herself from saying something potentially offensive.
I would definitely like it if more chapters like this could be written!
February 12 2009, 13:42:35 UTC 3 years ago
February 12 2009, 14:29:21 UTC 3 years ago
One of THOSE dialogues...
Tripping through unfamiliar territory, trying to get away from whatever centricism is constraining one's vision. She is trying though, and thinking past some of the obvious clangers before she drops them. The number of times I've been asked whether I have difficulty balancing on just the two hooves (nope!) or whether I catch my horns on low overhangs (rarely, and better my horns than the top of my skull)...Enough about me. Good reveal about the nature and culture of gorgons (messing with mythology is always fun). Particularly the bit about classical mirror trick not working against their gaze weapon. Maybe someone will develop some protective eyeglasses for them, like in The Voyage of the Basset (or the X-Men >:=), possibly based on their own inner eyelid.
I had to look up amuse-gueule, one of those idiomatic phrases that the French are so fond of. Literal translation: "face-entertainer", gueule having the meaning here as in "feeding his face". I have just had a vision here of a gorgon dinner jacket, with epaulette-like shoulder pads on which feeding trays can be arranged, keeping all the hungry little mouths amused while the owner socialises.
All of which raises the question of whether the gorgons are French analogues. I am undecided. But the existence of gorgon chefs, the importance of good presentation of food, culture and the arts are all points in favour n'est-ce pas?
Another thought occurs: would the disposition and attitude of a gorgon's head of serpents influence their personal relationships?
- "I never thought your mother was anything special, but she could stick her hand right into my crown without being bitten, and her wreath only ever nipped me, so I couldn't really argue with that."
- "My mother married wealth, my sister married looks, I married a man who can clean and oil my wreath every day. I think I got the best deal."
There is also the question of how the snakes excrete what they have digested... ...but I won't go into that if AE doesn't.
The fact that the serpents have autonomous animal intelligence brings up all sorts of interesting thoughts. Can some gorgons consciously influence or control them? Also, we mammals often forget about all the bits of us that aren't under conscious control. When I step into a blast of freezing air, I still feel my hair follicles tense up and my hairs stand erect, same as every other mammal, and feel a strong urge to shake my hide and fluff my coat out. Then there is the gut, which has its own primitive intelligence and own rhythms. We only have executive control of the very front and back ends of it. (Not entirely true in my case: I have conscious control of everything from the stomachs forward. Benefits of ruminancy, folks - I can make the walls of my oesophagus dance.)
Anyway, good to see Lucinda out and about. I'm sure Lance would make a big fuss if he knew. But with creative posing and a glance from Cetea, he would also make an amusing coat stand. Not to mention an amusing scene if dumped sans habillements in the woods/fountain/Callahan's office just before he unpetrified.
February 12 2009, 17:13:28 UTC 3 years ago
Re: One of THOSE dialogues...
"There is also the question of how the snakes excrete what they have digested... ...but I won't go into that if AE doesn't."Well, if they "share blood", presumably it gets there somehow... Also, don't forget this is a world with magic, so our logic may not apply!
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"The fact that the serpents have autonomous animal intelligence brings up all sorts of interesting thoughts. Can some gorgons consciously influence or control them?"
It makes me think of Celia in "Monsters Inc." - her snakes reacted to her thoughts, "kissing" Sulley, hissing and rattling when she got angry...
February 14 2009, 15:37:51 UTC 3 years ago
Re: One of THOSE dialogues...
Possibly their excretion works the same way as that of demons and nymphs?February 15 2009, 09:20:12 UTC 3 years ago
Got an extra "and" in there.
February 15 2009, 17:39:46 UTC 3 years ago
February 17 2009, 05:20:22 UTC 3 years ago
On natural hiss story
And cold-blooded facts
Would Cetea and
Her kinfolk enjoy dining
On Gorgon's olla?
Cetea may be
Related to Scylla as
Offspring of Cetus
February 19 2009, 18:18:57 UTC 3 years ago
This story
The entire series has been great so far, although I am noticing a slight increase in spelling errors on your latest stories. That's not what I am focusing on right now, though.Cetea is my main focus and the entire reason I made a Live Journal account just now. I really, really like how you did this particular story and described the back story for Gorgons in general as they exist in this universe.
I would love to see more about her in the story as time goes on.