A moofable feast. ([info]alexandraerin) wrote in [info]ae_stories,
2009-02-19 13:14:00
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Void Dogs Chapter 64: Closeted

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[info]popelizbet

February 19 2009, 21:21:07 UTC 3 years ago

typo? possibly?

If you mean "explosives/weaponry", it should be "ordnance", not "ordinance". ;D

[info]alexandraerin

February 19 2009, 22:13:26 UTC 3 years ago

Re: typo? possibly?

If you don't think there can be explosive ordinances, you can't have sat in on the city council meetings during the leash law hearings!

[info]popelizbet

February 19 2009, 22:14:20 UTC 3 years ago

Re: typo? possibly?

Hee hee hee hee hee. I stand (well, sit) corrected.

[info]zathras_ix

February 19 2009, 22:20:35 UTC 3 years ago

Regan sets about
Making preparations to
Come explosively

[info]damanrando

February 19 2009, 22:31:17 UTC 3 years ago

On Towels

So the towel was right useless eh? I suppose so, nice Hitchhikers reference anyway, made me laugh.

[info]misslynx

February 19 2009, 22:53:19 UTC 3 years ago

*laughing helplessly*

I guess you talk about wanting the universe to throw pussy at you, you need to be a little more specific... :-)

[info]granite_grizz

February 20 2009, 10:28:12 UTC 3 years ago

I must admit, I'd go ahead and let Regan have her way with me.

Wait, I'd have to be in a no win situation where death was a near certainty for it to happen? No, no, no...

Well, maybe.

[info]hnmic

February 20 2009, 16:11:32 UTC 3 years ago

“I’ll make you a deal,” Lilliana said. “If we do die, I’ll give you anything you want.”

I got funny looks from the next room, I was so busy giggling.

[info]lunaroki

February 21 2009, 17:59:41 UTC 3 years ago

More Typos

Speakin’ o’ different stories, did I ever tell you the story o’ how brought antibiotics to…”

Needs an "I" between "how" and "brought".

“Fine… just don’t go blowing us up to hasten thing along,” Lilliana said.

Should be "hasten things along".

All the products on them where in locally produced in-house brands.

Just guessing here, but I believe "where in" needs to be replaced with "were".

[info]pgranzeau

February 28 2009, 16:33:11 UTC 3 years ago

Has anyone noticed that this story appeared in line rather than behind?
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