“She might be a little cold walking around * her stomach hanging out,” I said.
I believe a "with" was lost between "around" and "her".
None of the more expensive salads with strips of chicken breast or bacon on cheese on them were left, which was unfortunate becauseTwo would be picky about getting a more balanced meal.
I think that first "on" was supposed to be a second "or".
One other little detail: The title of this LJ entry is missing "Tales of MU" in front of the chapter number.
That's how I read it. I don't think we'll be seeing Sooni for a while yet, at least not until things start to get a bit more back to normal on campus. It sounds like Logic class is next for Mack, the one class Mack and Sooni both still share. Expect no appearances from our favorite fox-girl.
Wow! It took me over a month I think, maybe more, spending pretty much every night reading and basically immersing myself in this story. This book is truly a work of art. So much complexity and parallelism! So much depth and history in all the main characters! I'm seriously impressed and drowning in impatience to read the next chapter, but that's ok, I can wait. I do want to read MToMU, but I haven't been able to find a link since I last saw it so many chapters ago. Could somebody post one please?
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February 16 2010, 07:16:35 UTC 2 years ago
February 16 2010, 08:12:33 UTC 2 years ago
typo alert
becauseTwo would be picky about getting a more balanced meal.needs a space char between because & Two, methinks...
h.
February 17 2010, 00:46:03 UTC 2 years ago
Typo Report
I believe a "with" was lost between "around" and "her".
I think that first "on" was supposed to be a second "or".
One other little detail: The title of this LJ entry is missing "Tales of MU" in front of the chapter number.
February 16 2010, 08:14:54 UTC 2 years ago
On the other hand, it should be entertaining, in that wince-inducing way. (cackles a little)
February 16 2010, 14:52:36 UTC 2 years ago
February 17 2010, 00:41:53 UTC 2 years ago
February 16 2010, 08:54:25 UTC 2 years ago
February 17 2010, 04:41:29 UTC 2 years ago
"Representative being"
That Lee has described?
February 21 2010, 14:21:26 UTC 2 years ago
Just got cought up!
Wow! It took me over a month I think, maybe more, spending pretty much every night reading and basically immersing myself in this story. This book is truly a work of art. So much complexity and parallelism! So much depth and history in all the main characters! I'm seriously impressed and drowning in impatience to read the next chapter, but that's ok, I can wait. I do want to read MToMU, but I haven't been able to find a link since I last saw it so many chapters ago. Could somebody post one please?February 22 2010, 16:08:26 UTC 2 years ago
Re: Just got cought up!
You could just hit "Other Works" while reading ToMU. ;)Or go here: http://more.talesofmu.com/